10-30-2009, 10:01 PM | #1 |
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Beauty Contest - Normal Rank I
And we’re up, up and away with our first ever beauty contest where we’ll be pitching some of FBs most beautiful Pokémon against each other in a pageant for the ages. We’re here in sunny Volcanic Mountain where our contestants will be fighting for the most prestigious award a beauty could have; the Normal Rank Beauty Ribbon! And now, to do an introducing session to our wonderful audience, heres;
SP-Eevee and her Altaria, Cumulus Shadowshocker and his Umbreon, Factor Stark and his nameless Typhlosion Silver Wind and his Ledian, Ledah Mewsic Box! and his Vespiquen, Bumble And last but not least, PikaGod with his Flareon, Puff. *Audience applauses* Now the first challenge is our appeals round. This is where your Pokémon can strut their stuff, with you behind them. Remember to use Italics to chose what field you want to play on. Anything you want in terms of natural terrain can be found, from large rocks to small flowers at the spin of a lever. And now just a quick reminder as to the scoring: 1st move: 10 2nd move: 10 3rd move: 10 Style: 20 Flow: 20 Beauty (Audience's Reaction): 30 Points will be allocated based on how well your Pokémon does as they appeal to our judges. Remember to visit the Beauty Contest Hall should you need any further rules or shoot me a PM if you have any questions. And remember, while beauty is in the eye of the beholder, you want to impress everyone so while Roleplay is not mandatory, it is encouraged strongly. If you can send me your PMs with your appeals round we can get this beautiful party started. Todays special guest judge will be House M.D star Olivia Wilde who is promoting her latest season of House M.D |
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Looking energized and happy, Ledah is quick to rehearse its appeal and although not practiced, the 75 Beauty Points and the setting of the arena help the crowd and the Pokémon. With both holding their breath to see the final outcome, Pepper and the audience wait silently, intrigued into the Ledian’s moves. As a small gust blows through the arena as the room fills with a light pink aura, the psychic energy calling from the heavens. With Ledah in the centre, the crowd ‘oooh’s and ‘aaah’s as the Ledian begins to turn the same colour. Mysteriously granting a new power, the move instantaneously shows off the COSMIC POWER that the Ledian has. Moving swiftly on, the Ledian begins showing off its DANCE moves, repelling some of the loosened leaves on the ground by the power of SWORDS, spinning on the spot as the audience get drawn in, expecting something big to come from the Ledian to follow the amazing start. As the move begins to slow, Ledian opens its mouth SWIFTly sprays a impulse of stars. As the stars hit the trees, they explode before sprinkling small star dust on the floor. Bowing to the crowd, Ledah and Pepper leave through the curtains as the judges confer before revealing their score on the LCD TV. Total Score: 34 / 50 Judges Notes: A good appeal, but the last move kind of let you down. With such high-powered moves at the beginning, the audience were really expecting a grand finale at the end. The first move complimented the arena by refracting the pink / purple against the dark wood, but the next two didn’t much. The swift could have been ordered to be placed higher so the dust could fall down more instead of a rather low down. Quote:
As the queen bee gathers the confidence to start the routine, it begins by slowly rising from its pokéball. Starting the move off, Bumble beats its little wings as a small gust of wind is formed. Shooting the SILVER WIND into the air, Vespiqueen waits as the move sprinkles down on her. With the move complete and the entire audience watching closely on Bumble’s progress, the bee-Pokémon uses a CAPTIVATE to draw the audience in even more. With the alluring bumblebee shooting hearts out, the crowd go wild. Expecting a grand finale, Bumble proceeds to charge bug energy into its, somewhat small, claws and shoots it up into the air. As the lemony-green attack flies into the air, the move doesn’t seem to break and glitter like Tim had hoped but hits a branch, releasing a large cluster of leaves that fall down. Fluttering over, the crowd murmurs with consideration, realizing that the attack was splendid, even if not meant. Taking her bow, Bumble and Vespiqueen head back through the curtains to the competitor’s zone as they wait for the Judges’ judgement. Total Score: 35 / 50 Judges Notes: A very good appeal indeed. While the moves were most defiantly thought out, many attacks don’t glitter unless you break them yourself with another move, and instead carry on as a hard move until hitting something. This did lose you a few marks but aside from that it was a very good appeal indeed. Quote:
Feeling good and energetic despite the initial setback with the small amount of applause, Typhlosion follows its orders by curling into a ball, using a FLAME WHEEL to convert a mass amount of flames around him. The Typhlosion races to the end of the catwalk as the flames cover its movements. Popping up at the end of the catwalk, Typhlosion instantly releases a small splurge of EMBERS to continue the fire combo. Conveying the audience into Typhlosion’s moves, the fire-type draws upon a great deal of fire energy to send out a stream of fire into the air. Getting out of the way with childish glee, Typhlosion lets the fire hit the ground before taking a bow before leaving, begging the dawn of the judges’ comments. Total Score: 41 / 50 Judges Notes: A very, very good appeal. No use of the special arena creator meant that the moves really didn’t fit but that’s ok, only a few points dropped. Quick and snappy, the beauty was clear and the message conveyed. Quote:
Beginning the contest round with an approving nod from the judges, Umbreon begins walking much like a beauty pageant contestant, strutting along the reflective water before getting to the end. While the appearance of walking on water was indeed not something the crowd picked up on, the suspense of the first move keeps their eyes on the Umbreon. Continuing with the ordered appeal, Umbreon fires a large WATER PULSE at the floor to create a massive splash of water. Quickly reacting with no space in the middle, Factor then releases an ICE BEAM to freeze the water in its place. While the water settles in a dome, Factor jumps in the middle of the frozen bowl before FLASHing a beautiful light yellow colour around the dome, reflecting the light throughout the stadium. With its appeal finished, both Shadow and Factor take a bow before heading back-stage where the await the Judges. Total Score: 39 / 50 Judges Notes: Indeed, another good appeal. The feeling of walking on water wasn’t quite shown and you lost a little on that. Nothing major for losing, just some technicalities like it being a little wait for the first move to come and that Factor had to jump into the bowl and before, the audience ahead couldn’t see it due to the water being in the way. Quote:
Quickly moving as the Flareon struts its stuff, one paw comes down to the sand in a scooping motion; the resulting SAND ATTACK throwing up sand grains from the desert floor. With reactions similar to Umbreon, the Flareon uses its natural heat to burst a large FLAMETHROWER from its maw in attempts to convert the sand into glass. As the audience looks on, they are soon disappointed to see the sand not turn into glass. With that out of the way, Flareon moves onto a HEATWAVE which, due to the previous heat from the flamethrower, eventually converts it to glass. With the pretty glass falling on the floor with a slight thud, the Flareon bows before heading back into the back room. Total Score: 21 / 50 Judges Notes: Unfortunately, the plan that you had ordered didn’t work. As sand needs 3360 °F, the only Pokémon that is currently able to do this is the most recent one, Magmortar. Being a Pokémon that lives in volcanoes and being a triple evolved Pokémon, Magmortar can only just reach 3,600 degrees F in a fireball, let alone a flamethrower. Had it maybe been a Fire Blast it would have had a much better chance at turning it to glass, but was still shaky. Quote:
With the stage set and the contestants ready, Cumulus begins as the audience watch. Moving into the clouds, Altaria toughens up in front of the crowd, BULKING UP suddenly as it becomes focused on physical attacks. As some of the closer fans really appreciate the blending of the clouds and altaria, some further back struggle to understand the movement, seeing very little of the Altaria. As it gets to the end of the catwalk, Cumulus lifts its wings above the clouds and releases a HEAT WAVE, the red flames insde the wind replicated what a cloud can do. With the audience intrigued by the heatwave’s effects, they are given little time before the next attack comes in, the resulting BLIZZARD spraying all over the sky. As the attack hits the warmer after effect of the heat from above, the snow begins to heat up and fall gently, the sparkle of the liquid as Cumulus takes a bow before leaving, ready for the judge’s decision. Total Score: 42 / 50 Judges Notes: Another good appeal. The only thing that really let you down in terms of moves, the point of contests is to show off your Pokémon and blending her with the clouds could be done better. Had it been a grey cloud to represent rain and she blended in to turn it to a happy cloud among depression, you could have received more points. And this means our four semi-finalists are… Kelly and her Altaria; Cumulus Stark and his Typhlosion Shadow and his Umbreon; Factor And Tim with his Vespiqueen; Bumble! Now this round will be a bit different. All four of you will be on an unbreakable marble floor as you each walk forward with one move each per round. The semi-finals will contain three separate rounds where you each PM me your attacks. There is a twist however. If you wish, you can jam your opponents through the use of jamming moves. You are also allowed to chose your opponent who you wish to target, which means that every competitor needs to be wary. Contestants will receive DOUBLE points if they complete a round without being targeted. Constant jammers need to be aware as any jams unsuccessful (through moves such as harden etc.) will lose the beauty points they gained through the moves use and will be added on to the defendants hearts. Got it? Good. If not, feel free to shoot me a PM and i’ll try to explain it again. Now, your PMs please. |
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First to move because of her having the most points is Cumulus. As the Altaria wobbles onto center stage to show off her beauty, a decisive Overheat bursts from her feathers as she opens her wings, the red flames streaming upwards as the intense heat causes the ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ of the fans. As Cumulus finishes the move, she looks a bit more nervous around the other competitors, signalling that she may be more easily startled. With the second highest points, Typhlosion walks onto the stage to replace the cloud-Pokémon. As the fire type growls, its hand begins to glow a faint crimson colour before the Typhlosion uppercuts the air, sending embers of the resulting Fire Punch into the air, a beautiful display of power and beauty combined. Third to be on the stage, Shadow’s Umbreon cockily swaggers onto the marble flooring and takes the safer option, sending a spiral of Silver Wind into the air to coax the safety onto itself. While this is a rather small appeal in terms of the others, the chance of stealing points is still to come. Lastly, Bumble buzzes onto the scene with a wink, Captivating the audience by showing off its curves in an attempt to make itself the center of attention. While the fans don’t react by giving extra points for beauty moves, the bug does succeed in getting itself some love hearts. With nobody targeting anyone with blocking moves, all contestants get double the points they would normall get! As such, here are the scores on the doors. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 12. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 8. ♥♥ 2. ♥♥♥♥ 4. The next round PM please, and this time the order will be randomized by RNG. |
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