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Old 06-04-2016, 08:14 PM   #148
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So.. there's definitely lots of good in this. I love the quality of the update, I love that you've planned for so many eventualities, and the reward is good (though I will say having Pokemon give out money is rather strange and not a choice I'd make, though I can't claim to find anything intrinsically wrong with it.

My biggest issue is the railroading at the beginning of the quest. While I know how much effort you intend on putting into the quests you craft, it's NEVER a good thing to force your updatee into a quest, even one as diverse as this one.

1/3 Approved since everything else is solid and I don't want to reject you on lterally one thing, though.
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