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Old 08-05-2016, 10:02 AM   #71
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Dusknoir (Ghost): Dusknoir are relatively solid and prefer that state, but can go ethereal or invisible with little problem. Unlike Duskull and Dusclops, they can levitate with decent speed and agility. Their defense and special defense are slightly higher than those of other Ghosts. They can be poisoned.

So, there's nothing wrong with this SC, but I think some mention of Dusknoir's stomach mouth should be made. It doesn't have to give a boost to attacks fired from it or anything, but having that explicitly mentioned would only do more good than harm.

Muk (Poison): Muk are made up of poisonous substances made of liquid slime. Thus, toxic or polluted chemicals heal them instead of harm them. The same is true for poison attacks. Muk can see in the dark. Muk also leave poison in their path, poisoning the ground and leaving a substance that can cause minor poisoning to Pokémon if they come in contact with it. They are also very flexible, and can fit through gaps that most Pokémon of their size couldn't. Their bodies absorb physical blows, and physical projectiles, making all attacks in these manners 80% effective. However, as the slime is liquidized, they take slightly more damage from electric attacks.

Again, nothing really wrong with this one besides the Electric weakness, but some mention of Muk's swimming ability could be added to it?
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