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  1. BLEU
    04-11-2017 12:59 AM
    Thanks, and writing as detailed as I write isn't even cool, Look at some of the guys, MM and Ette, these guys are brilliant. Just read a lot of books, and to start with try copying the style of one of your favorite authors. And, mainly, don't just say "He ran fast." Instead, say, "He picked up his pace, as he started dashing ahead, leaving all the buildings and lamp-posts behind him. He could feel the cold wind blow across his face and the rustling of the wind against his ears. Leaves blew all around him as turned sharp corners and edges. He was running fast, probably faster than he thought he could."
  2. kawaiiconcept
    04-10-2017 12:05 PM
    very good,
    i wish i could write as detailed as you do
  3. BLEU
    04-10-2017 01:37 AM
    Yea, lol.

    How was it?
  4. kawaiiconcept
    04-09-2017 04:37 PM
    got it
    sure ^.^
  5. BLEU
    04-09-2017 02:53 PM
    Say, I post in the bar and I show up with owning a Salamence, for example. What if someone said I cannot have that strong Pokemon or something. Or if I walk in with Onix destroying half the roof. People say that is bad and ask me to delete my post or anything. So, I thought its better to take permission. :P

    Would you want to read my first post on WF?
  6. kawaiiconcept
    04-09-2017 01:33 AM
    im not totally clear on what you are reffering to
  7. BLEU
    04-09-2017 12:48 AM
    I mean, coming in and then people having issues is not cool, you know. :/
  8. kawaiiconcept
    04-08-2017 10:23 PM
    Sounds good
  9. BLEU
    04-08-2017 11:14 AM
    Yea, I'm gonna have a talk to those active guys on the bar if I can still do it, you know, a mysterious character, a squad of 6 medium-to-strong Pokemon and no backstory. Maybe.
  10. kawaiiconcept
    04-08-2017 10:27 AM
    i dont really know how to answer that

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