It looks ok. More detail in the main body of the reffing would obviously help. Perhaps commentary on a particular attack being good or overused, perhaps a comment on the viability of a strategy. That atuff

Do you consider yourself a veteran of ASB? If so, I politely ask of you if you could review my referee application on Sppf, if you could. Now I know there is an easy loop hole for you to wiggle out from and say no, but I'm going to ignore that bit.