Hello there! ^^ So I am not able to confirm your
Togepi's birthday post at the moment (I'm at work), but I can tell you right now that as it is at the moment, it won't be approved:
1. You have to absolutely use the items on that post. Just "picking them up" is against the rules (since it has to be used on your Birthday Pokémon, and since you only picked the items up, I can't tell if you'll be using on said Birthday Pokémon or not.)
2. You have to write a before/after on all stats. Again, against the rules (because I have to confirm that your calculations are correct)
To correct that, just use anyone else' birthday post as a template and change things up to fit with your Togepi's stats, and you should be good
Thanks in advance!